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Date: 2003
Rating: R
Warning: Adult situations between two men.
Pairing: H/S
Summary: Harry shows he learned something from the Potions Master after all!

This story has no spoilers.



Response to After Class Mailing List Dictionary Drabble
Word Count: 150
Word: Meticulous

Main Entry: me·tic·u·lous
Pronunciation: m&-'ti-ky&-l&s
Function: adjective
Etymology: Latin meticulosus fearful, irregular from metus fear
Date: 1827
: marked by extreme or excessive care in the consideration or treatment of details

- me·tic·u·los·i·ty /-"ti-ky&-'lä-s&-tE// noun
- me·tic·u·lous·ly /-'ti-ky&-l&s-lE/ advverb
- me·tic·u·lous·ness /-n&s/ noun





Come Undone




Years of lessons and detention at the Potion's Master's hand led to this moment.
Focus.
Concentration.
Determination.
His approach was methodical.
His attention to detail was unmatched.
He combed his memories to guide his technique.
He knew his patience would be rewarded.
Diligence and a willingness to surrender to the moment would place Harry exactly where he wanted to be.
Just enough pressure there.
A swipe there.
More pressure there.
The temperature is almost right.
Another moment.
Wait for it…wait for it.
Easy.
A touch more.

Three.

Two.

One.

Harry grinned at the sight before him.

Hogwarts' Potions Master was propped against the wall of his storage room. Robes roughly pulled apart, shirt askew, pants undone revealing a fair amount of skin. Small shallow breaths leaving his mouth as his chest heaved.

Harry grinned. Severus was absolutely right. Meticulous attention to detail would bring about the most explosive of results.

~ fin ~








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